Intenste kick, and melody!

Hmm, well to start of, I am not quite impressed by the intro of this song. You could do some more, but I liked the claps combined with the bass. Anyways, I love your kick, and the bass sounds fine.. do not feel irritated by that little boy beneath me.
Structure of this song is good, however those snare rolls ruined it for me Example:(1:54). They where too long, and not well placed in my oppinion. Anyways a tip here, instead of letting the snare roll for like 8 seconds or so, try to lower that to 4 seconds maximal. And also do not let it roll on the same speed, increase it at 2 seconds, and last ultimate speed at 3 seconds.
Overall a good song though, the melody is very unique, only too short.
5/5 8/10 <- 8/10 for the flaws as described above. Do not think I disliked this song, I mostly give reviews with critism, there where certainly good points in this song as well. those are the things/instruments wich I didn't reckon in this review. Keep it up you got potential!

_-Scorp-_

Really nice!

I've heared the original and I must say, I am impressed man!
Strong and well placed kick, and that cracky bass just finishes this delicous goodness. I hope you can soon finish it, however it's a problem that Kazmo might not work on it so you don't know how the original would sound. And actually I am quite stunned by the fact that you've copied his melody... Did he gave it to you? Or did you made it yourself? If so you recreated it perfectly. Loved your lead, and synth! I think it's nexus but I am not sure wich lead exactly.. I forgot lol. Anyways, this is IMO slightly better so far because of the strong and powerfull lead. Great job so farr!
5/5 9/10 <- the 9/10 is for the fills that could've been used, I actually miss some twists in this song, so far I've heared it where only crashes, and FX kicks.

_-Scorp-_

*- Would love to hear a review on my song as well if you want to. ;)

Totally like Brandon said..

Awesome intro for a hardsyle song! With those hard noises, made my mind go shuffle lol, Lovely bass as well there. But when that monsterious kick comes in I totally wowed! Can't say enough about those hard noise effects, it fitted in there really nice. However 1 little flaw in my oppinion, and that'll be the melody as Brandon said as well. You'd better use another hardstyle lead, or put the volume of this one much higher. But about the melody itself it's an average melody, try to make it unique and a little weird for the originality. The structure of this song was really well, snares and claps, and the good placed kicks where tottaly awesome! Nothing more to say, only that little flaw on the melody that's all. And I must say try to take the information that Brandon said, and deal with it. ;) 5/5 9/10.

_-Scorp-_

*- I don't know if you're in trance but, I've been recently been submitting as well here, and I'd love it if you could take a look, and review my song as well. ;)